Losing You by ____THe.bosS 2011/07/12 11:39
I never thought this day would come,
Where my true love would leave me,
I know you see me all tore up inside,
But what else is there to do but cry.
You are watching over me day and night,
And you can feel my pain inside,
You tried to stay here on earth for me,
But God called upon you and wanted you with him.
The reason I'm still living is,
I know your waiting for my turn to go,
And every time I feel like dying,
I think what would you want me to do.
Laketempest 2011/07/12 11:45
Nice /smiley
Someone 2011/07/12 11:48
Nice one. Bit short but ends with nice lines.
Laketempest 2011/07/12 12:52
-give- make more.
SpArKo 2011/07/12 12:53
Oh thats sad..
_-FiRe-PhOeNiX-_ 2011/07/12 12:55
NiCe one /smiley .
lady_xyrelle 2011/07/12 13:00
sad but god have always reason 4 everything..
LoneLy_heArt 2011/07/12 13:11
losing whom /smiley
NinthElement 2011/07/12 13:19
Great work /smiley
Sweet_Divyanka 2011/07/12 13:26
Wow bro keep going on /smiley
Lelsi 2011/07/12 15:03
Aw its sad indeed, but everything happens for a reason..even when our loved ones leave us forever they remain alive in our hearts.
GhAyAl 2011/07/12 19:54
Nice 2
Ice-Fairy 2011/07/13 06:05
So sad/smiley
R49hu 2011/07/13 08:53
words are perfect and good one once again
Marlou 2011/07/13 09:16
/smiley thats soo0o sad.
_ShAnE_StArK_ 2013/09/21 12:44
good post...
KenMane 2013/09/22 14:01
Surity
RasJamy 2013/09/23 05:53
It painful
RiC_L 2013/09/23 08:13
Nice /smiley
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