Love at first sight.
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Degrees360
2011/04/07 12:44
Over there she stood smiling Staring straight into my eyes Worthy of note was her beauty Like shining sparkling stars A perfect painted picture she is im sure One of the wonders of nature With ease she walks Bestowed on her was a crown and a regalia For queens Physically not visible But in my minds eyes and in my heart of hearts Only i could see. Within me was a judas all these while i never knew Betrayed by my heart i was led Into a world of wonders new.
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Degrees360
2011/04/07 12:51
Thanks @ Eminem.
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Ravikumar08
2011/04/07 12:57
Okay .!
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Degrees360
2011/04/07 13:01
@Ravikumar, thanks alot.
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Lelsi
2011/04/07 22:45
nice poem.smile.you know don't belive much in love at first sight, coz its just an illusion of love-and you need to take a deeper look..
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-Annie-
2011/04/07 22:47
i m nt believe love at first sight
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Mahesh
2011/04/08 02:20
Sweet poem... Well, the love is very complicated. There is no way you can love someone the first day you meet them, you could find yourself physically attracted to them. But its not true love.
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Alebi
2011/04/08 02:46
wow nice bro
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RUDE_DUDE
2011/04/09 00:17
nice .
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hYpNoTic_aNgEl
2011/04/09 01:13
Nice one-smile-
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Gerald24
2011/04/21 14:25
Ur ryt miz. Amela:-)lol
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Alebi
2011/04/21 14:47
very very nice poem!!
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farooqpatel
2011/04/22 00:45
Nice it happen sometime
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Tony-rizzy
2011/04/22 02:16
Love at first sight. It seem wondering
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THE_SPEAR_KING
2011/04/22 07:33
Gud 1. . .
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kazzy
2011/05/17 16:58
thanks 2pac
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Jaforey
2013/07/26 00:11
Its a fake love. Dont believe on love at the first sight
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_ShAnE_StArK_
2013/07/31 18:36
I beleave at love at fst site:D
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