Cyrus. vs rickosi4eva_Dwizzard by
Resphanto 2010/11/14 03:19
YEAH! The Rulez
Verses 2 each (1Post=1 Verse)
24hours (1 day limit) pUNCTUALITY WILL BE STRICTLY OBSERVED!
PRIZE: 150+s to the winner......
JUDGES:Shaev7,Black_Listed,Ungerground and Resphanto.
pLEASE NO INTERFERENCE UNTIL AFTERMATH.
....let spill blood....
rickosi4eva_Dwizzard 2010/11/15 17:00
bef0re I WR0TE THZ LYRICS, I PRAYED AND WASHED MA HANDZ WIT BLOOD OF THA SPIRITZ so thaT AnGELZ TOO CAN LIKE IT:_ -glit-
rickosi4eva_Dwizzard 2010/11/15 17:21
I pikUP DAH W0RLD & DR0PIT 0n ya PHUKIN BIg-HEAD!
N0w thz wh0t I call P3otry EM0TI0N It s3tz yA hRT iN MOTION /ma s0ul blids on ma paper ya hrt SCRIMZ wit 3m0TION /diz ma daily D3VOTION /MA Verz's deep3r dan dah OC3AN! HIP-H0P U 0W3 M3 A PR0M0TI0N!
Yeah I do a littl3 bragin&nagin cusing COMOTI0N me&all 'em DJz w3 gat a r3lati0n /ya haterz c0m3 wit ya sagin&lagin,bt amma ch3micali brutaliz ya 3xist3nce wift ma ch3mical CombusTI0N c0s ya bl0d 0n err0si0n/wen ma lirik dr0pz it flits wit DIFUSI0N/thz aint ya reality DOG! thz ya ILLUSHN/dem0ralizin ya fl0wz/cox mine seemz like A R0s3& 2 all 'em haterz an OVERdoze it stripz ya cl0thz/AM THA B3ST OF D WEST/u crab-hed ya w0rshp m3 wit a chaplet am nT ya GOD? U CRACKED-HEAD!
Ya tryin t0 kis M3/bt AMMA g0n swalL0w u/u wann dizz me,I kill ya/spil ya p0llut3d bl0d on ya galfrndz c0rpes/AM rick0si THA BIG-B0SS am a ril c0p/I rul3 ova dah s3a s0 'em cal m3 d S3a c0p /feel ma fl0z,it givz ya HIK-UPZ/cox itz ril wat I'hv don 4 HipH0P! AM D T0WA AM THA HiLt0P/
ma fl0wz neva ENDZ it neva st0pz/wen it strtz it ERUPTZ&getz LaM3 mindz lik yaz CORRUPT/dnt c0f n0 shxt!?! Bro, jst
I l0v3 2 ci ya bl0d paLE/yar JAILED 4 N0 BAIL!PHUKIN mice! Dah farmarzWIFE cut-0ff ya TAIL/yar lif3's a Dice I tossd it twiCE/ ma fl0z strikz 0ncz bt hurt as baD AS tRICE!!! I dnt pay F00lz pric3! Ya BIG-HEAD IS 4 SACRIFICE!
I murdad ya modar by sp0t-lite/ya Dad by stag3-frite/gat a msg 4 ya: u cant Fac3 m3/cox u cnt trACE ME/I gat n0 data/ya g0nn brk ya nek dropin dat ya bux3D-cETOXED-frikin bigHEAD in2 ma rappTRAY.
I murdad ya bro by ma GUN BREATH!
1.2.5.5.. I DECode ya c0dez kilin u wit0ut a verz .2./ask ar0nd d scene DOG AM THA B3ST .2. HEY SPEKTAT0RZ watcH Thz rat wit ma fl0z 0n im b0dy lik a TATOO/smmh...h3re smellz fishy dnt tel m3 u'r3 a CraB-2!
>u cnt st0p watz abt 2 hapEN 2u Itz ur Do0m wift Myst3ry/u DED 4rm 'd START/C0X I DID IT 4RM MA HART!!!
Resphanto 2010/11/15 17:52
Cyrus its yr turn...
Cyrus. 2010/11/15 19:18
Nice one bootlicka. Respect. Lemme show ya how to do it, though.
Resphanto 2010/11/15 19:36
Quote:
Cyrus.: Nice one bootlicka. Respect. Lemme show ya how to do it, though.
Hey nigga where d fuck hav u been,d whole 2wapworld has been waitin for u,
Nigga spit dis shxt real quick cos u aint got much time.
Cyrus. 2010/11/15 19:43
Let's Do This Y'all.
I gave your shxt REsPECT/ but when you get dissed, make me tha Prime SUSPECT./ When I'm done dissin, I'll drop you low nigga, wit' no RESPECT/ with tha worse TREATMENT/ than even devils EXPECT./
Tha BLOOD FLOOD/ of countless fakerz I POPPED/ leaves you APALLED;/ washes your weak-arse WORDs/ off your brain like tha GREAT FLOOD./ Everytime my name's CALLED,/ your system gets really FUCKED./ Cause you know I'm Superior, your think-tank can't but get STALLED./
Tha roar of ma Words are gonna scare you outta 2wap's Wall. Now Dick (Rick,) run for your Liver, cuz my name's jus been CALLED./
*WARNING ALERT!!!*
You're just about to get HAULED, then MAULED, by ma PREDATORY VOCABULARY. You Are Advised To Start Singing Your fucking ELEGY, Before I Intern u In Tha F%*k'd Rappers' CEMETERY.
U've just been warned mur'fucka, so Let's get GRIMY aNd DIRTY.
Autotune n Verb'l Killaz know me ALREADY, cuz I was tha unknown NEWBIE turned famous PRODIGY. Many say they know me now like 50 (Cent) cuz I make tha girls Drop It Low like Esther (Dean) in a JIFFY. Others claim I'm a hard HITTER like Tyson in his TIME,/ cuz tales of ma conquests make haters SHIVER like I was Ali in his PRIME./ I'm tha nu world WONDER who blew tha Ish like a BOMBER. Tha lyrical OSAMA chasing you fake OBAMA wif my FOKKER. Relax, I'm not a TERRORIST, but I'm able to make your demons beg for an EXORCIST. That's cuz I long took tha magic STICK from 50(Cent) afta dissin 'im so hard, tha homie turned 80.
I'm done introducing myself a lil, so this time amma be less lethal.
Like resPHANTO, it don't mean that I've become FRAGILE, cuz I'm a PHANTOM, I play wif SHRIKE MISSILES when I SMILE. Howeva, amma do ma best t' hold ma hounds BACK, while I make ma lines SHARPER than the teeth of a SHARK. Even when I hold BACK on ma ATTACK, you n your weightless rhymes are still gonna CRACK. So, u better back-off ma Word-TRACK, or amma smash u colourless than BLUE-BLACK wif tha 24's of ma BLACK CADILLAC.
I'm Dat NEWBIE, here again, t' bcom famous ROOKIE over your bitch-made LOUSY ARSE in da 2Wap MASS. Amma skool YOUR dumbASS, so nitwit, get in-2 YOUR CLASS! Brand your ARSE like a real ASS, wif ma HOT vocal CUTLASS. N make u watch your bitch while ma 8 inch, real thrill (ma dick) raves her ARSE...
In ma verb'l RAGE, I drop u wif a HAEMORRHAGE. Ex^hi^bit your smelling corpse on a STAGE for your fans. For further delight, feed it to ma Raptors in tha CAGE. U didn't pay heed to ma warning, Nigga, FADE AWAY! Amma ride every NAME, starting wif yours in this GAME to make ma much anticipated FAME, while you BRAIN DRAIN, as I TAME you LAME, then render you tot'lly INSANE wif Ma lyrical HAIL RAIN of PAIN. Tha REal COCCIDIOSIS4eva + D fuckin' LIZARD?! I hear u are Resphanto's ill Hybridoma's PROGNOSIS. With COCCIDIOSIS (chicken disease,) DIAGNOSIS says u're a chicken. N dat explains why tha STATISTICS show u keep on losing.. Amma cut your branded arse 2 PIECES in 2 MINUTES. A Lizard 2?! You Arse-WhipPeD CRaWLER, get unda ma TRAILER! Lemme smash u FLATTER than ma BlackBerry's WALLPAPER. Amma rip your GIZZARD, toss it right into a BLIZZARD. I'm a Psycho Rap-HAZARD, my cum leavin you half BATTERED.. Clap ma hands n wen m done, continue gett'n u BUTCHERED. Hit HARD like a Sledge Hammer, toss u 2da 8th MILE, DISMEMBERED. When memories remember, they'll say, "Dickhole (Ricko) left all SCATTERED. Tha worst part of it all, was he got eaten by a BUZZARD (large flesh-eating bird)" Alas, the hyBRID LIZARD, can't be found in da F%*ked Rappers' GRAVEYARD. If you need to pay respects, get a BUZZARD's shxt all GATHERED.
Cyrus. 2010/11/15 19:48
Ok Rick, your turn. Let's make it hot.
rickosi4eva_Dwizzard 2010/11/15 20:00
Yeah okay Am BAK 0N THZ LIKE I JUST PHUKIN SIGNED MA RECORD DEAL! Dah BEST IS HERE!!!
-warn-
rickosi4eva_Dwizzard 2010/11/15 21:34
...nusrey rhyMEz l0ong tyme I hrd 'em
-police1- -police1-
nW I bring ab0uT THa PRIME-RHYMEZ rhymez dat c0xed daH W0RLDZ criME-tim3! Ma rhymez PHUKIN SCREAMZ IT CRIME-TIME rhymz dat makz F0olz L0ze GADdamNeD SLAMED-MINDZ U l0st! Wat?... YA GADdmN! Mind I mak ya BLIND/SO HAD 2 GRIND
cyrus-cryrus s0ndz m0r lik RATus-RATus! U'r3 a ZTE PHUKIN RAT! 0ut-dated Rat-BReeD/DNT c0me Clos 2 Me u Infectd RApBEAST/u mite be cyrus dah Rat/bt Am 'd M0ST FEARED CACTUSplant/I get u usedUP lik a STYLUS/c0ndamnd! Ya PR0SpectuSI c0mp0sed Ya D0om U rat! Wit0ut A TesT-tube/u'r3 an 0utdated Breed!
I GUEs w3n I buried UNDAGRND 6ft unda dah GRND h3 RAP3D ya SLAGED-LARGE A.H0LE/c0x im a RAT-rappist!U JUST MET THA RAP-DENTIST!u funy TOOTED-RAT
Ya JST A c0nfused IrreleVANT-Isreali monoMENT in EGYPT!/Ma FL0Z 'R3 hot RIPP-IT! If u CAN
I SLAY G0TZ yaz nt an XCEPTI0N/bein doin evab4 dah INCEPTI0N 0f ya CONCEPTI0N/didnt c0m 0ut dis nght 4 Pis-talk/bt U DUM-ASS-FRIKDup-RAT-BUNNY-RATass,2 set TRAPZ/2 SHUT ya DirtyTRAP!
u're fl0z 're ILL, BUT rick0si's FL0WZ 're DEAD&BURIED ma rapp lyrik'z c0rpez G0t l0st UNDERGRUND!
ya fl0z dnt SPK/smelz lik SHXT!/I MAK ya pee tru ya N0strilz/shxt tru ya Mout/MAK u spk tru ya AZZ
rapperz lik ma Nam3/'em d0 it c0x 'em lov ma FAME/U CNT BE ME! U cn only wiSH! I r3main4EVA!
Ma PHUKIN PR0M0TI0N c0xed ya G3n3raTI0N a C0NDOLTI0N/thz ma HipH0P C0r0nati0n ah gat b3st HIKED-UPconfolti0N!
ya m0m said u a deadFISH(in ma handz)/ya dad,u a dead raBBIT(in ma handz)/ya dnt wann LISTEN am tha Wild-f0x tearin ya 2 shedlez pizez/ya bl0d 0n ma Danz-FLoR,ya ripeD b0nez I feD U? S0 CHEW SCREW M00!
ya sis,u aint n0 BRAIN! Sik 0f dz usl comPLAINZ/so I blesd ya FamiLi witH MYGRAIN!-ya lovd it/ya'al chew it as daH BEST GRAIN!
u s3e wat u fil,u fil wat u h3ar/ma rapz EXCEdz
wat ya cnt 3vn C0nci3v/u get rap fre3D w3n u say ma rap creed/u cnt unDO MA DiDz/u stand lik treez wen I utta ma VOCAL-BReeZ!&u 3at ma G.shaped shxt lik CHEEZ...frikIN L0NG-G0N3 RAT-BREED!
Eleto 2010/11/15 21:45
rick da man
rickosi4eva_Dwizzard 2010/11/15 21:49
I gat bl0oo0d 0n Ma EyEz! & ICE ON MA BLOOD -skull1-
H3 gr3ata thaN THE DEVIL JUST DEM0NICALLY RELIGATED YOUR LEVEL/made u SMALLA THAN gravel.
IN2 THA DEVILZ mouTH, & OUT of THE DEm0NZ ASz.
-glit- rick0643va_Dwizz -glit-
ya turn.
Cyrus. 2010/11/15 22:56
I see you improving.......on LOSING. Relax, Doggie, m cummiN.
Cyrus. 2010/11/15 23:15
You're so weak, you're in your ANDROPAUSE (male menopausal period) and now m gonna take u out wif deafening roundz of APPLAUSE.
C'mon Rickosi, pleeassse. Lemme use you 4 ma lab TEST. Dissect u like an INSECT or better still, treat you like a PEST. I'm tha Rhyme Lord of 2wap's NEST. Bow Now, 2 ma CONQUEST. You's a rhymer, but a faker: you can't stand ma Heckler's TEST (Heckler 'n Koch Rifle.) Even when you wear a Kevlar VEST, ma vocal BULLETS are still gonna pierce through 2 your CHEST, splitting your vocal CORDS like axes on LOGS, makin u go speechless b4 I lay u 2 REST
I'm da CRUELLEST Rapper from tha WEST, wid a QUEST in 2wap 2 erase fake niggaz' BEST wid tha LEAST of ma BEST.
Watch it lil' Reptile! M not makin a JEST. I'm a threat to your EXISTENCE and ma CONSISTENCE beats your RESISTANCE. Wanna confirm? Be ma GUEST. Lemme SHORTLIST u in ma BLACKLIST and MERCILESSLY make u tha NEXT nigga to get a Rap HEX before puttin u UNDERGROUND, under a Vultures NEST.
Check ma avatar, I gat your head wif others ROLLIN. Guess you know now dat I'm da real ish u should b DREADIN. SMASHING your weak skull wif this ma ill little THREADIN, as I rhyme ma way 2 tha Top, u wish u was NEARIN. Now your bitches TRIPPIN cuz they see your stick go WEAKENING, at tha WHIPPIN of my words, OMG, look at 'em DRIPPING! SCREAMING ma name, "CYRUS, BE MA MAN ," they can't withstand ME. Now, Cyrus is NAILING 'em Pussies, while you are WAILING..
Da bottom LINE of ma words make you so rotten in QUICKTIME. I stay sticky on all your 10 fingaz like I was THICK SLIME, HELL, Dickhole, in this battle, you can't even type in good TIME, cuz u is battling Cyrus, Tha Wonder King from an old TIME, who put an end 2 tha Babylonian EMPIRE, at its CLIME. My lungs are full of NAPALM, every shxt I spill blows you in NO TIME. From every height you've CLIMBED, I'll pull u down, stick u in thick SLIME. When I'm boRed, I'll reverse tha process, wif ma own SANDS OF TIME (Prince of Persia.)
I'll subject u 2 LOBOTOMY,
in ma LAB of ANATOMY. Oppress u with ma TYRANNY, wif indefatigable ENERGY. I'll have u feed from d scraps of ma rap DINNER, u mur'fuckin PRETENDER. Work your arse OUT, till u black-OUT: U'r ma slave, stupid FaKER. Give u a whip-arse all day, while u sucking on ma SPUNKA. Cuz ma SPUNKA got what it takes 2 make u a real PLAYA.
U're a lyrical mish-MASH. Your words so unconnected, u spit THRASH. Come over here, lemme whip yo ARSE, n How 2 Rap, I'll teach, REHEARSE.
Tha Cyrus is so MAGNIFICENT. His SWag is so SWAGNIFICENT. Cum's splashing like ACE OF SPADES/ over your fuck-dizzied bitches' FACE/ while DICKHOLE stinks so putrid like his dizzied WHORES stretched ARSEHOLE.
I'm a Sage and a MAVERICK. I even got many MAGIC TRICKs. I'll leave your brain so very SICk, wif a wave of ma magic STICK. I stand strong like a BRICK wall, when you see me, you SHRINK dumb. A tol ya b4, amma skool your dumbASS, weakened JACKASS! Get back inside Nigga, tha rap CLASS ain't fucking over. Where I DISS u, tha GRASS ain't gonna GROW. Homie u can KISS ma NITROed ARSE n BLOW.
I SPILL ILL shxt you cocksucka can't but FEEL, so suck ma dick cuz it's da REAL THRILL. I'm da RAW DEAL, pokin deep holes in your mur'fuckin spine wif ma WORD DRILL. I gat tha brute SKILL n amma change all you SPILL to NIL. Unweaned dick sucka, u had better lay low cuz amma whip your arse 4 FUN. And when m done whippin, randomly mutate you till I YAWN.
I'm tha NOTORIOUS CYRUS, was born With SCUDS (missiles,) read ma WORDS. Pity u got paired with a fiend like me in this TOURNEY. Your JOURNEY's gonna end SWIFTLY, cuz I ain't gat MERCY. Amma bat (beat) you up wif'a HOCKEY stick, uncool MONKEY. When u land, amma erase your arse with a LOCKHEED (missile.) Guess'd you'd not be glad, I took you down wif more smoke than WEED. A noble DEED, I DID rather than skool yo arse with a REED. I know thatz what you NEED, but mur'sucker did you READ, I's tha NOTORIOUS CYRUS?
I splatter vocabulary so CONTAGIOUS. M a VIRUS, but u feel me like CONFUCIUS (tha renowned Chinese Sage.) I gat your hands on your head n your Jaws, slaCkin, cuz you lack ma kind of TACTICS. All the TACTICS u think u got, I lit-up wif MATCHSTICKS, n ma DRASTIC Shit's soon gonna make you go so SPASTIC. You shouldn't even be thinking of any PROPHYLACTICS.
I know you've heard tha saying that, "A stitch in time saves NINE." Amma let u get no STITCHES; fill u with ma NINE (Barretta 9mm.)
Cyrus. 2010/11/15 23:20
(Dickholestinks4eva, u get 2 lay low, u smashed-up Lizard.)
Resphanto 2010/11/16 06:45
RICK 1ST VERSE
Punchline:WEAK
Flowz:GOOD
Meta4z:saw 2 or 3
Similezne
NamePlay:NONE
Multies:NONE
CYRUS 1ST VERSE
Punchline:XCELENT
Flowz:REAL GOOD
Meta4z:NICE
Similez:saw 1
NamePlay:GOOD
Multies:GREAT
RICK 2ND VERSE
Punchline:GOOD
Flowz:GOOD
Meta4z:NICE ONE
Similez:NONE
NamePlay:GOOD
Multies:GREAT
CYRUS 2ND VERSE
Punchline:XCELENT
Flowz:GOOD
Meta4z: saw 1
Similez:NONE
NamePlay:GREAT
Multies:GREAT
RICK's 1ST VERSE were full of weak PUNCHES and he wasnt DISSIN his OPPONENT real HARD,but a GOOD com back in yr 2ND VERSE.
CYRUS used RICK's weakness in his 1ST VERSE to eliminate RICK.an Xcelent one CYRUS u fully had yr FINGER crossed on yr TRIGER wif no xception.yr 1st n 2nd VERSE were GREAT, NICE ONE.
RICK wat happened to yr RUGGEDILITY i dnt see much of yr ACTION in dis BATTLE like dat off UNDERGROUND.anyway u did a good JOB.
CYRUS 4 ME
Underground 2010/11/16 08:42
The battle was like a boring storybook. You guyz were just trying too hard.
Rickosi had good punchlines but poor delivery, the rhymes were not that well executed too! Making me to think what rickosi wrote on his 2nd verse u're fl0z 're ILL, BUT rick0si's FL0WZ 're DEAD&BURIED ma rapp lyrik'z c0rpez G0t l0st UNDERGRUND! I couldnt agree more man, you didnt do as I expected(Compared with the one against me!) Did this make any sense? S0 CHEW SCREW M00! also in yo 2nd verse.
Cyruss did a bit better in his rhymes but punches werent thet good. Eventhough his 1st verse was flowing well, I only liked the beginnings of the 2nd coz towards the end it just didnt make me wanna read it any more. I did like how you played with Blacklisted & Undergrounds nicks in this line. Lemme SHORTLIST u in ma BLACKLIST and MERCILESSLY make u tha NEXT nigga to get a Rap HEX before puttin u UNDERGROUND,
But I hated the way you used the word ARSE too much in your verse, it was like the only word you could think of. It reduces your ratings!
Underground 2010/11/16 08:53
1st verse goes to cyrus
2nd verse was a draw to me!
That means Cyrus is winner overall!
Shaev7 2010/11/16 09:29
Good shxt...
Too many long verse.
Wel,i beliv in punchez n deliveries...
Rickosi. 1st verse
punchlines:jus mild wt nice delivry
flows:xcellent
nameplay:non
wordplay:few
multies:non
meta4s:good
similez:Nice
2nd verse
punchlines:good beta dan 1st
flows:still tite
meta4s/similez: ok
nameplay: non
wordplay: non
multies: non
Ricko,dnt kno wat hapend cuz u were 2dope wen u battld Underground n u faild 2deliver it here...
Cyrus da angry Newbie.
1st verse:
punchlines: impresed me alot
multies: ok just few
meta4s/similez: ok
flows: non
wordplay: kul
nameplay: nice
2nd verse
punchlines: gud but nt as 1st
meta4s/similez: mild
nameplay: realy impresive lyk unda said
worplay: non
multies: non
Final Judgement:
my vote goes to Cyrus!
List3d cast your vote.
bLaCk_LiSt3d 2010/11/16 10:03
3votes on cyrus,so he initially is da winner..
So ill make it simple then,1st its too long,n kinda getting boring...make it little bit shorter nxt time guys...
Ricko;
1st verse i saw sum average punches with sum nice flows..2nd verse a lil bit better with lil bit of meta4..try 2add more combinations
Cyrus;
2nd verse is better than da 1st one...i can see nameplays n wordplay..good job..good battle from a newbie,thumbsup
1st&2nd verse;cyrus
-I vote cyrus,great job
Shaev7 2010/11/16 10:26
Cyrus Winz!
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