Spektraflamez VS Jamolus2003 by
Shaev7 2010/11/10 03:10
R.U.L.E.Z
2VERSES EACH
2DAYS TIMELIMIT
JUDGES: LiSt3d,Underground & Rickosi.
Lets begin da brawl.
jamolus2003 2010/11/10 04:51
yuh spektraFLAMES!, god hw come dis LAME/ got into da LANE/ dis GAME's for duh DAWGZ/ who want duh FAME nd not for da DOGS/ dat brood duh NAME SHAME. oh i'm jamolus so u know ma NAME/, wot will i GAIN if i make u INSANE/ cs yuh mama will feel duh PAIN she'll be screamin ma NAME/. all dis bcos of her LAME son FLAME/
ma AX3 cuts TOUGH soon u'll b DEAD/ so u r ASK3D 2 back OFF if u value ur HEAD/ if u INSIST/ my AX3 will move so SwIFT/ nd then SHwwF....it's off with ur HEaD.better take heed 2 wot i SaID or ur HEaD goes to ground LEVEL/, i'll get it packaged nd send it 2 duh DEVIL./ i,ll make sure i DO WELL/ by delivering ur head 2 where duh devil does DWELL./ oh ye big FOOL/ all dis is not d price 4 ur EVIL/ it's only for ur FUMBLE,/ d greatest price still awaits U, see U.
jamolus2003 2010/11/10 10:49
yo goat, better post sumfin or get kicked over d goal post. Looks like u want me 2 win by default
Spektralflamez 2010/11/10 14:30
GrrraaaHHHHHHH! ~wALLz CrAcKiNG~gRoUnD OpEnInG~...,The EviL OnE cOmInG....,U aWokE The "god oF ChAoS",FrOm mY BloOd sTaiNeD ChaMbEr/i reLEaSe dAnGeR,I sErVe yoU dEaTh,YoU "DoG iN a mAnGeR" ReAd tHe TeXt oN YoUr PaGeR,...."BEWARE DEATH CANNIBAL WUZ ERE"..I TuRn YoU a "ROASTED HARE" eNcRUsT "cRuShEd dEeR" wItH nO HeAD hAnGinG LiKe "SCARE CROW" daNGlinG,I FeEd oN FLeSh - N - BLoOOd, i bUrY YoU In tHe mUd oF ThE FrOzEn ArCtIc/sO EmPhATiC/ErAtIc aNd dRaSTiC,tHaTS wHy i'M ~SpOrAdIc~ i oVErCOme u wItH ~boOOOmBASTIC~DriLL YoU LiKe liKe a ~boaCONSTRICTOR~ WhEn i cOmPrESs/ur sUcCEsS Go ! Is sOuRLeSs/mY ViCtoRy is FLAWLESS/U D cOnVIct,whIle mY ImAge is ~VICTOR~I'm bLaCk eViL,mY bLOoD ObSsEsSeD with PoOsSeSsEd cOnTenTs/oBjEcTs,stRiKe mE aNd wHeN YoU Do,mY BLoOd drOPs anD CrEePs oN ThE FLoOr,eVERy biT Of it FoRmS a sCoRpIoN LiKe ~ThAt oF MeDUsA~ DeFiNaTeLy U a LoSeR! ,cHeCk yoUr ~brAiN CONNeCtIoN~ YoUr wOrDZ'rE OfF TaRgET In nEtWOrK CoNnTEnTiOn oF WaR Of wOrDZ,bRiNgInG POLLUTION/I PuT YoU In sTrEsS CoNfUsIOn/uR VIsIoNs WiTH BLaNk iLLuSiOnZ.2wap sOuLjaH I rEpREsEnT,u ! FREAK,sUcK mY DiCk iN ~pEsTiLeNcE~ tHeReS aN ~EviDenCe~ gUyZ FeEL mY ~EmInEnCe~tHeY YeLL ! KiLL ! KiLL ! KiLL,so i PuT YoU In a sTaTe oF ~DeLiQuEnCe~YoU RaG !VAgaBoND !I HaNdLe tHe gLocKS LiKE ~jaMEsBoNd~ mY GaLLaNtNeSs ! TuRnS YoUrS 2~ NoNeChALLaNTNEss~ u sPeAk iLL aNd ! MaNnErLeSs ! POoR hOmE uP B rInGiNg! NeXt tiME TaLk LEsS Or I fIx ~DIcK GuNz~ inTO YoUr mUf,BLoW YoU Up inTo tHe dEeP POnD,!FuCk yoU,LeT ThE BeAT rOcK,LaY On the CraDdLE,sO I DeEP HaY aND BRICKz iN ya muF and bLoW YoU Up ! ! WILLoW nOw yOU KnOw th e rEaL ! ! HERO ! !
jamolus2003 2010/11/10 17:26
u think u cool, lets start round two. U go first
Spektralflamez 2010/11/10 23:34
wIrL~ WiNd~ bLoWiNg, "fIeRcELy" cOmInG FrOm tHe dEpThZ oF Da sEa...,wAlKInG ToWaRdZ ThE "LaNd oF Da DeAd"..! ! AAAAaaaHHH,it's U "TaMeD maGGoT" froM ThE DeCaYeD aSs oF Ya maMa's is LiKe a "FaGGoT",LiKe u WeRe "rEbOrn LiKe a "sTiLL bOrN" 2 thIz sEcOnD VeRsE.u'Re juSt maKinG a mEsS..."ur TaLk is cHeAp",LeTs gEt sTaRtEd * * * * * BiG DoGZ DifFeRz/LiKe "BeAvErZ" I dRiLL Ya fLeSh,puT YoU LoW LikE GrAvE "DiGGeRZ" FeEL ThE BiTe fRoM mY cAnInE CLiPPeRz,i dUsT YoU OuT LiKe diRtZ FrOm mY SnEAkeRZ ,I SeT U aBLAzE WiTh 3 fiNgErZ On "tRiGGerZ"wE "BLoOd dEaLeRz"***NoW GeT HiT*** ! ! I'm a "GeRmIcIDaL CaTaLyZt" qUiCkEN Ya dEaTh LiKe a "BiOLoGiCaL TeRroRisT" sMaSh yOu doWn Like "rEcYcLeD MoToRisT"FeEL My pUnCh cOnTaMiNaTEz Like a"NuCLeR HoLoCaUsT" Ya FLeSh -N-BoNe iS WhAT I FeAsT aT Mid -NiGhT,My aNgEr iS Like a FrIgHt" FEeL ThIz "VaNqUiShMeNt" cOs mY PrEsEnCe iS a "BraNdIsHmEnT" I GoT "GLaMoUr" LIke "ThAnE Of cOwDoUr" i pUt YoU In peTz cAgE OuT dOoRz" * NOTE: *mY LiFe GoT DuPLiCaTez" ur'z is Like YoUr biTcH THaT "fOrNiCaTeZ" YoUr bRaInZ NeEdz "LuBrIcAtEz"u 're bitCh hAz a "CaRpEt aSs" hEr boObz sTrETcHeD sHoULd bE HiDdEn LIke "LAnd MiNeZ" *A~N~G~R~Y* coMe tO My dOmaIn/wHeRe eviL DwELLz/bLoOd sTaInZ On waLLz aND panEz dRiPpiNg,I SeRvE YoU hYdRo wiTh "HUmAn sKuLLz" aND "reeFeRz" i waLk oN yOu LIke "BaThRoOm sLIpPErZ" MaKe u mY dOg'z cAgE SWeEpErZ".So nExT TimE YoU SeE "FLaMeZ" WriTTeN aLL OvEr" BiTcH NiGGa/u knoW Is GaMe oVeR".
jamolus2003 2010/11/11 10:29
so u gOt d GUTS 2 POST, i thOught u 1td me 2 win by DEFAULT/ now i,m gonna crAckkk ur head open like NUTS/nd send u 2 hell's COAST wit a major ASSAULT/ fink dats a nice INTRO/u got there? Cos i'm 'a BLAST back open d VAST shiT FLOOR nd send d self ACCLAIMED piT HERO/back 2 d stenching piT he came from. I aint givin u a premaTURE lecTURE, dis aint no kid THEORY/, i'm gonna deal wit u WAPICALLY cos in my ARMORY,/ i got plenty of glOCKs in stOCK. oh son of maN, y aint u CIRCUMCISED?/ now get ur cOCK inna d glOCK nd hav it STABILIZED/. i'll giv ur cock a nice crOWN/ if u shall only BOW, i'll keep ma VOW/.yr rhymes r just full of self praiSES/,JEEZ,PLEASE,phuckin go 2 BLAZES/.we doin BATTL3 u fagg3d CATTLE/,stop da self RATTL3 nd drop sumfin SENSIBLE./ ma rap's like aCid, it rains so maSSIVE, u better take yr l3av3 now or i rain it on ur FACE/ nd erADICATE ur RACE/(lineage) without l3avin any TRACE/. oh dont ba DAZ3D,i already dropped u in d MAZE/ i'm gonna hav u SLAY3D nd ur carcasS set ABLAZE/
dis is my verse TWO nd it's just 4 U,i told U dat ur RHYM3S r DEAD/ i hv already done d RISE of ur HEAD/ from ur NECK,oh wot da HECK, u've TREKKED back frm h3ll,now i'll hav ur outdaT3D rhymes Wither AWAY/ nd d handZ used in WRiting dem decapiTAT3D nd dried like HAY/.i'm so alarmed @ d MAGNITUDE of ur lack of creatIVITY nd incapaBILITY/,u r so blind dat u cant even see ur inaBILITY, soon ur idenTITY would b eraZ3D or poS3D as a symbol of stupiDITY/. i'm truly a niGGER bt i didnt phuck ur Wif3/, i didnt hav 2 botHER cos her pussy's got no LiF3/, d pussy lookd so CREEPY/ man, it got me SN33ZY nd made me feel DIZZY/(laughin). u said ur life's got duPLICAT3/, now u've done urself d worst of imPLICAT3 cos i'm a hav all ur xtra shxt life 2 suffoCAT3/.u might just b 1derin why i just grabbed ma KNIFE nd ma VEST/ ma knife is to snatCH ur sorry LIFE nd ma v3ST is to ch3ST away ur fake lyrical BULLETS/ i hav taken ma knife nd 4gotten it deep in ur heaRT, nd 3 sh3llz i have LEFT in ur drY CHEST/. now i cn leave u in d hands of da deVil 2 REST, while da judges take their BROOM/ nd sweep ur leftover crAP outta 2wAP rAP FORUM/. when next u come outta ur cRAcked shiT GROUND/, dont cross ur BOUND/ try 2 act NICE/ nd i give u my woRD, together we shall play DICE/
bLaCk_LiSt3d 2010/11/12 01:13
jamolus 1sverse;
Punchlines: average
Flows; average
Meta4z/similez; didnt see any
Nameplay/wordplay/personal/multies;none
Spektra 1verse ;
Punchlines; xcellnt
Flows; xcellent
Meta4z;got sum good ones ,i see 3-4 meta4z
Nameplay/wordplay/p'sonal/multies;none
Spektra 2nd verse;
Punchlines; excellnt
Flows;excllnt
Meta4z;excllnt
Jamolus 2nd verse;
Punchlines; excellnt
Flows; excellnt
Meta4z;excellnt
Jamolus 1stverse was kinda of short n weak,but a good ill cumback with da second verse..
Spektra's 1st vas was ill n killed wit da 2nd one
Spektra 4me..
rickosi4eva_Dwizzard 2010/11/12 09:53
SP3CKTra-
*fl0wz: A
*rhymez: A
*meta4z: B
*punchez: B
w0rdplay: B
Mr. J(2003)
cam3 as a new memba bt like an 0ld memba.
*Incr3dible verses nice rapp skiz.
*rhymez: A
*punch: B
*meta4: D
*fl0wz: C
w0rd play/namez...: Nice
c0mmentz didnt xpect dat xpl0ding much 4rm MR. J /u fl0w so g00d thumbsup u tha mahn. Speck... he cam3 up wit Translucent attacks in hz verzes/lukubi0usly scandul0us & diab0lical wit g00d-w0dz usage.
rick sayz sp3ck!
Shaev7 2010/11/12 11:41
ok 4m3 too......... jamo came back @ the 2nd but spek did good wrk in his 1st....
Spek got it.
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