* you are the one * by zhEirA 2009/01/02 08:34
a girl once love a guy from a distance..
she's a loner..
she always watch him from afar..
though she may never be with him as often as she would want to,
that didn't stop her from loving him so much..

on the contrary, the guy often notice the girl staring at him,
her way of looking at him made him feel so annoying,
he cant explain why he's very much affected by the way she stares,
he cant deny the fact that the girl is beautiful..


Unpretty_Marie 2009/01/04 02:14
/smileyArgh! You made me cry with this one sizzie../smiley
MaDdY 2009/05/10 13:31
nice it is
zhEirA 2009/01/02 08:35
they became friends..
bestfriends to be exact, in a short time...
that was the happiest moment of her life,

until..
the guy suddenly proposed her love for the girl,
the girl cried,
tears of joy and sadness,
the guy she loves finally learned to love him back..
and at the same time, she knew that,
that love wont last,
she'll be leaving soon..
and she felt already that her life will come to an end,
she said to the guy,

"if you really love me,
tomorrow, you will not text me, call me, and you will never come to see me, okay?
just tomorrow..
this is a test..
if your love is true, you will follow my instructions okay?
i will wait for you in the beach near our house after 24 hours of my test.."

the girl walked away, the tears that she'd been hiding fell down..
she whispered..

"tomorrow, i may leave with lots of memories of you,
your smile, your face, your laughter, and most of all your love..
i can follow my fate happily now..
i love so you much...i'll miss you..".

GhAyAl 2009/02/21 11:18
OuTSTANdING !SIMPLY AWSME!
GhAyAl 2009/02/21 11:18
OuTSTANdING !
zhEirA 2009/01/02 08:34
one day, the girl went with her mom to the doctor,
hopes and dreams faded away as the doctor gave the result of her test..
she have a cancer and she only have a month to live..
tears stream down her face,
but as she cries,
a face gave her strength to live her short life worth dying for,
then she made a decision..

the girl finally made her way through the guy she loves..
but the guy drove her away,
said that eversince,
she's annoying him.
but the girl kept on trying and trying until the guy accepted her...

Waste 2009/02/19 08:07
Even i hate short stories.
zhEirA 2009/01/02 08:38
the guy followed the instructions that the girl gave her..
while sleeping before the end of the 24 hour test,
he dreamed of her, the girl he love,
wearing an angel dress waving at him,
she came near him, and hand him 3 white roses,
she said.

"i want you to know that i love you,
you may find me as an annoying person then,
the way i stare at you,
but i dont have the courage to say how much i love you,
i love you so much..
please always remember that i will still watch you from afar eventhough you can't see me now,
just please smile for me..
your smile is my strength and your tears are my weakness..
so please smile always.. love you..,"

the girl stretched her arms as wide as she can, then..

"i love you this much!.."

zhEirA 2009/01/02 08:39
a light then shined and he woke up,
he noticed tears on his eyes steaming down his face,
he fixed himself then run as fast he could on the beach,
bringing the engagement ring for her..
he was surprised by what he saw,

a burial,
and there are no people aside from him..
he came near the coffin,
tears again run down his face,
he found a letter on the top of the girl he loves' coffin,
it says the same thing the girl said in his dreams..
with a note that says,

"congratulations,
you pass my test..
now take care of my heart,
i left it for you to hold..
i love you this much..
(a drawing of angel stretching her arms..)
now will you smile..?"

WANZPDA 2009/01/02 12:48
woW..GrEaT SeNtAnCe..
WANZPDA 2009/01/02 12:50
i LiKe iT'S..
BRitney 2009/01/02 12:53
CUte.......
SexyBaby 2009/01/02 13:01
Wow dats a cute story
[b] Ms. 2wap'09 [/b] -first- 2009/01/02 13:01
nice one eckha/smileygreat l0ve st0ry but it so sad,cuz itz end up in sad st0ry./smiley
Wala 2009/01/02 13:04
i dont want this happen in my life, but i think i have a few years to live, hays... i have a leaukemia, i want to experience love,care to da person i love./smiley
Wala 2009/01/02 13:07
but, the its imposible, i have only 2years for stayin here, in world, /smiley hope in my next life, i wish i have someone who wil love me.
-SwEeThArT- 2009/01/02 13:14
/smiley.../smiley...
Hell_bound 2009/01/02 13:27
gud story, Touch heart /smiley
Mz_un1qu3 2009/01/02 15:28
AaawwW /smiley
ROCKY13 2009/01/02 17:17
hey its mine!! /smiley

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